Waking up, he looks up onto the ceiling. Thinking why was he born. He has brown hair, sort of a chickens haircut, brown eyes, and a well fit body. His name was Tim.
Tim: Hmmm, what's going to happen today I wonder..
Tim hears faint knocks on his door. Tim slowly walks towards the door, not knowing who it might be. Tim grabs ahold of the doorknob, twists it, and gets pushed back onto the floor with great force. Somebody knocked the door down with Tim along with it.
Tim: What the-?
Stranger: You're coming with me.
Tim: Fuck is this?
Stranger: ....
The stranger proceeds to Tim. Tim, slowly moving back, looks for a metal or pointy object to defend himself with.
Stranger: That won't help you now.
Tim: Why the fuck are you in my house?
Stranger: It may seem like nothing yet but you are the one we need.
Tim: Who's we?
Three big men walked up behind the stranger. All four men wore black tuxedo suits. The man on the left, was the tallest. The man on the right, was the second tallest, and had a formidable built body. The man in the middle appeared to be the boss.
Boss: So, your Tim?
Tim: What the hell is going on?
Tim started to shake.
Boss: Alright, we have no time to lose. John, take him.
The man on the right whose name was John, approached Tim and knocked him out with a quick punch to the face.
5 Hours Later
Tim wakes up in an underground cavern.
Tim: Where am I?
Boss: It's about time we introduce ourselves.
The boss took off his tuxedo and sat down on a chair right next to Tim who was chained against the wall through the neck and legs.
Boss: My name is Alex. Alex Slick. I run this joint if you haven't realized.
Tim: Why the fuck did you kidnap me... What are you planning to do with me?
Alex: Look kid, we're here to do business. What we do is, we sell the kids to the outside world.
Alex smiled.
Alex: You know what I'm getting at. Anyway, we have you up for $300,000,000.
Tim: The fuck? Why so little?
Alex: Because our business is quick.
Tim: What's gonna happen to me?
Alex: Nothing you should know about. Although, your freedom has been canceled permanently.
Tim: No...No...
Three large, built men appeared behind Alex.
Alex: Let me introduce to you, my right hand man, John.
John: Hmph.
Alex: My left hand man Ruslan.
Ruslan: ...
Alex: And last but not least, Daniel, who rammed through your house.
Daniel: Gah! I told you not to call me Daniel! It's Mole! From now on, I'd appreciate it if you called me Mole!
Alex: Alright.
Tim frightened as ever looks down and cries.
Tim: *Sob* ... Why me?
Alex: We chose you because your very special to certain kinds of people. We believe you have the key to the parallel world called, Runescape.
Tim: What? Runescape? You mean the game?
Alex: Once the right people get ahold of you, they and us will enter this parallel world and turn this world into that world.
Tim: Are you kidding me? It's a game. I'm at the top 10 players if that's what your asking.
Alex: He's tricky. Alright, we'll need to bring in the heavy guns.
A black shadow is seen in the background, a man steps out of the shadow.
Mysterious Man: Long time no see, Tim.
Well...it's a start. Ruslan is such a badass name. I think that's the best part of this opening. It needs a bit more pizaz to it. Aside from that, it's a nice first shot.
ReplyDeleteI'm intrigued to read on, lil bro.
Thank you so much!
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